哪位高手能翻出来两句基本对仗的英文么,古语也行,谢谢先
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给你几种经典的大家的翻译：
理雅各James Legge的经典翻译：
For life or for death, however separated,
To our wives we pleadged our word.
We held their hands;---
We are to grow old together with them.
Bernhard Karlgren的翻译：
In death or life (we are) separated and far apart;
With you I made an agreement:
I grasped your hand,
Together with you I was to grow old.
大诗人庞德Ezra Pound的翻译：
To stay together till death and end
for far, for near, hand, oath, accord:
Never alive
will we keep that word.
简明版翻译：
I want to hold your hand
and with you I will grow old.
或者更简单的
To hold your hand
To grow old with you
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网上的:)
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Give me your hand,
it is the tomb time.
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还有还有，电影里抄的
With this hand
I'll lift your sorrows
Your cup will never empty
For I will be your wine
With this candle
I will light your way in darkness
With this ring
I ask you to be mine
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看来的
死亡已降临永恒是荒凉
愿你安息在我身旁
(很诗情画意)
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for better or worse, till death do us part - I swear (All 4 One)
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grow old with your hand in mine
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这句很好呢，可惜有点长了，刻不下，
本来想能不能分两句，一个戒指刻一句呢
难道只能是
His: To hold your hand
Hers: To grow old with you
感觉不够装13哎
要不我把楼歪一歪，有什么其他短句可以用来刻的？
[ 本帖最后由 linalina945 于 2009-7-23 12:29 编辑 ]
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His ： Give me your hand
Hers: Take it
or
His: I need your hand
Hers: Pay for it
[ 本帖最后由 rosyywu1 于 2009-7-23 20:59 编辑 ]
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我怎么觉得这句和教堂结婚时说的 for better for worse 是同一个语境？
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hold kid hands, with kid older
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楼主或者把那句话拆成两句,两句单看不全,放一起就完美了.这也合了你那情侣戒指的本意.
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hold son of hand, with son together old
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Quite good, I have made some changes.
We held their hands; old together with them.
Old as verb.
[ 本帖最后由 pea 于 2009-7-23 23:09 编辑 ]
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看不懂，son是什么意思？
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for better or worse, till death do us part...
这几句很好的，但是不想在wedding band上面刻上 worse, death之类，感觉总是怪怪的。
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我的上一个改的不是很好。试一下这个。够短
hold thy hands, age with thee.
我自己都觉得肉麻了。
对了, 那位高手翻译一下肉麻？
[ 本帖最后由 pea 于 2009-7-24 12:09 编辑 ]
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找了半天也没看到 肉麻 的合适翻译，估计是国情不同啊，西方国家人说话肉麻惯了，所以，也许，人家从来没有这样的感觉呢。
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getting old together with holding your hands
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