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如题
请申请成功的筒子过来赐教一下啊！
谢谢！
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大家提提建议啊，还要怎么修改？
Dear Officer in Charge,
RE: traffic offence Obligation Number XXX committed at xxx on xxx
I am writing this letter to express my sincere regrets for my irresponsible action. I totally agree with that at no time speeding is safe, and I am proving it with my practical action on roads: no single speeding ticket for last ten years since I had my full driver licence. However, in this case due to my carelessness, I drifted over the speed limit for a short period of time with no intention of doing so. I have now modified my driving behaviour and pay more attention to my speed in any circumstances, in order to ensure this will not happen again.
Given my good driving record in last 10 years I would like to request a caution for this infringement.
Thank you very much! And with my best regards,
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Dear Officer in Charge,
I am writing in relation to traffic offence xxx committed at [时间] on [日期].
I accept that at no time is speeding safe. In this case due to [简述理由] I drifted over the speed limit for a short period of time. I have now modified my driving behaviour and pay more attention to my speed in such circumstances.
Given my good driving record in last 10 years I would like to request a caution for this infringement.
Regards,
[署名]
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good luck
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我记得政府部门里有个internal review 的form,你可以和楼上的信一起邮寄过去
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超速10km以下，有可能罚单取消，获得official warning；有可能
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这是我根据你给的，改写的，大家帮忙看看再改改
Dear Officer in Charge,
RE: traffic offence Obligation Number XXX committed at xxx on xxx
I am writing this letter to express my sincere regrets for my irresponsible action. I totally agree with that at no time speeding is safe, and I am proving it with my practical action on roads: no single speeding ticket for last ten years since I had my full driver licence. However, in this case due to my carelessness, I drifted over the speed limit for a short period of time with no intention of doing so. I have now modified my driving behaviour and pay more attention to my speed in any circumstances, in order to ensure this will not happen again.
Given my good driving record in last 10 years I would like to request a caution for this infringement.
Thank you very much! And with my best regards,
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谢谢，是的，而且现在还可以online lodge internal review
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帮忙看看我写的咋样啊？提提建议
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Dear Officer in Charge,
RE: traffic offence Obligation Number XXX committed at xxx on xxx
I am writing this letter to express my sincere apologies for my speeding at xxx on xxx. Due to my carelessness at that moment, I drifted over the speed limit for a short period of time although with no intention of doing so.I totally agree with that at no time speeding is safe, and I have been proving it with my practical action on roads with no single speeding ticket for last ten years since I had my full driver licence. I will pay more attention to my driving speed in any circumstances to ensure this will not happen again.
Giving my good driving record in last 10 years I would like to request an Official Warning for this infringement.
Thank you and Best regards,
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mark一下
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楼主， 这个版本就写的挺好的， 语法和语气也比较好，就用这个版本。
不过说实话， VIC改了罚单政策后，60开到69就被开罚单， 有点太严苛了。 我每天都跟着车流在60上面开70， 在80上开90， 在100上面开110.
反正如果你有开快车的习惯就不要做头车，不要做独车。
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求问各位大神超速15km/h的话有可能写求情信撤销罚单吗？
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不能了，网站上说了; over 10km 就不行了
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万分感谢，我还是老老实实交罚单吧
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多谢楼主，我刚在fine.vic.gov.au上面填了表申请了internal review.
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擦，你用了，我咋办呢？都写的一样，汗
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雅思小作文嘛 三段论格式 六分
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我改过了，保证不一样的。网上的表格里只能打400个characters的。
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吓死我了，赶紧给我加分压压惊
我还是手写吧
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现役警队成员帮忙看看吧？
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学习了，
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100以内是5%加3公里，60就是最多66.
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好几年前，我超了18公里，我就抱着试一试的心态写了信，内容无非也就是承认错误，保证以后不犯。最后还是豁免的。超过10公里以上我遇到过2，3吃，每次都成功的。
不过还是这句话，那两三次都已经是好几年前的事了。
不过如果你想的话，可以试一下，就是浪费1元的邮票钱而已。
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mark
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Ozbargin上有模版。
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又一个冤案
不冤？为什么上诉？Lol
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谁说是冤案？！你能读懂中文吗？上面有一个字说的是申冤吗？
求情是利用规则，保障自己最大化利益。在国外这个都不懂，你怎么混？
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规则在那里 speeding is an offence.
自己犯错 利用规则 利益最大化？你的利益最大化了 别人没有。你的行为 给别人 造成安全隐患。
钻空子而已 低调 。
Btw, 利用规则 自己利益最大化 让我想起了
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