大宝现在已经5年级了，可是感觉他英文写作的基本功不是很扎实，想让他提高一些，就想起小时候我上小学的时候，家长和老师都有给买或推荐范文的，去过几个书店，可是感觉没有相应的书可以参考。
想问问这里的同学家长们，你们都是到那里给孩子找一些范文的呢？
这里贴3个网上找的范文作为参考哦（都是7-8岁的孩子写的）
1 .My Computer
My computer is very special to me. I got it as a birthday gift from my parents last year. My computer has a monitor which looks like a television screen. It has a central processing unit. It also has a mouse which is used to move the cursor. It also has a speaker.
With my mother’s help, I have learnt how to type words using the keyboard. I have also learnt how to draw pictures on the computer. With the help of my computer, I am able to do my school projects quickly. I am able to gather a lot of information on various topics from internet, and make beautiful projects. My father showed me the Seven Wonders of the World on the computer screen through the internet. It was truly amazing!
Sometimes, with the help of my parents, I chat with my cousins staying in other countries. We also send pictures and letters to each other through e-mail. I want to learn more about computers and make the best use of this wonderful birthday gift.
2. A Visit to the Museum
Last summer when my grandfather came to visit us, he took me to the museum. The visit was an unforgettable experience. It was the first time that I had gone to such a place.
My grandfather has great knowledge about history. On our way to the museum, he told me stories of the kings and queens of our country. Inside the museum, he showed me many things. There were big swords, shields, daggers and other weapons with which the kings used to fight. He also showed me the rich dresses and ornaments of kings and queens. I also saw their coins and other articles.
Everything we saw had a story to tell. My grandfather told all the stories to me. seeing those things, I felt as if I had landed in a different world altogether. We came back home after a few hours. My grandfather has promised to take me to another museum next time he visit us.
3. Morning Walk
Of all the recreations that men indulge in, a morning walk is the most rewarding. The air is fresh and free of dust and smoke. In cities like Tokyo it is only at this time that the roads are not crowded. There is hardly any traffic. One can enjoy the walk. As one walks, the worries and anxieties vanish away. The feet stride out in a joyful rhythm. The sheer delight of movement is enough to make the day.
In the morning the nature is at its best. The dew-drops on lush green grass and leaves of plants look like pearls. The flowers laden with dew merrily wave their heads and spread their fragrance. So much color is splashed on all eyes and ears on such sights and sounds.
A walk in a big park or on the bank of a stream is even more refreshing. The charm is enhanced many folds.
The morning walk invigorates body system. It tones up the whole system. It prepares a man for the day’s work.
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楼主你这要逼死我家娃和他娘了， 谁家的娃写的范文。
我家的都9岁了，连这的50% 都没
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先声明不是我家的，不是我家的，不是我家的，重要的事情说3遍！
网上找的！都是写的7-8岁的孩子自己写的，看完以后我就想怎么能帮大宝找多一些这样的，我家大宝都10岁了，也写不出来这样的。
如果有那位有好的范文书或者网上的请推荐，我这里只是抛砖引玉而已！
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我找过，但没有找到。这里没有类似国内的范文书。有些网站有些范文，但不多，写得也不怎么样。
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10%的飘过
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这边不推荐范文的，就是鼓励孩子多读，写出自己的东西。
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多讀書多想象。讀多了就會寫。
學範文反而會限制孩子的寫作能力
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请教下，如何才能把看得东西内化成写作的内容，感觉看得书还挺多但是真写就弄不出来，有什么办法吗？
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可能还是阅读得不够。
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