the topic was what do you think would help the environment. i wrote a narrative
taking place in a classroom with a teacher giving the students an assignment
about what would help the environment. one of the students (the main person
in the story) thought maybe food falling from the sky would help the
environment. then it became reality, grapes started to fall from the sky.
the students were ushered into the school, he then he feared watermelons would
start falling. then it did.
this is just a brief overlay of how i wrote the story, the original one is one page long.
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这个是得高分的那个吗？感觉偏题了呀
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有点象一个动画电影，什么meatball的，食物都从天上掉下来
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对的
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他第一上来把题给偏过来了.
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哈哈，馅饼终于从天上掉下来了？
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好丰富的想象和创造力！！孩子一定在文法，用词，文章组织等方面写的很棒，２０分钟里完成，不容易。。
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谢谢分享
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谢谢分享
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